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Magical Medicine
Once upon time in China, there were two families in mountain. In mountain village there was a lot of mountains and really far away from city. Also there was no hospital and market. The first family had three members. First was grandfather, second is a boy name Ben, and last was girl name Lisa. In the other family there was only one boy alive, his name was Jack. Also he hated Ben and Lisa’s family and he did some bad things like steal stuff from Ben’s house and bothering him when Ben was working.
One day Ben and Lisa’s grandfather was really sick, so they wanted to go hospital and get medicine. But hospital was in middle of the city, it was really far away from his house and too expensive to buy medicine. So Ben decided to find magical medicine. The magical medicine was in somewhere. He knew medicine was somewhere because his grandfather saw that medicine when he was young, but he was so old it was over 30 years ago. So he went to the mountains to try to find that medicine with his sister.
But outside there was evil guy name Jack, who heard the magical medicine could be heal any ill. He wanted to get that medicine, so he could make lots of money. Jack started to climb Mountain before Ben and Lisa went to find medicine. But no one knew what looked like and where was that. They just knew secret and magical medicine was somewhere in mountain. Ben and Lisa climbed the mountain and they saw a lot of sick and dangerous animals. When they saw sick animals they helped all of the animals and when they saw dangerous wild animal they hid behind the rock or under the hole.
One time they saw big bird that had hurt leg, so they helped again. They were really surprised because they heard sound from bird. The Bird said thank you and, “why are you in mountain, and what did you try to find?” Then Ben said, “We are tried to find very secret and magical medicine.” Bird said, “I know what that is but it’s too dangerous. However if you really want that medicine I can tell where is that medicine, it is top of this mountain”. Ben and Lisa took about 3hours to climb mountain. Suddenly they saw the medicine. But there was Jack behind him, because he was following Ben and Lisa. He ran to medicine and he took it. Ben and Lisa were angry and disappointed.
So Ben and Lisa tell the entire story that why he have to bring that medicine. Jack felt really sorry for Ben and Lisa and he tell why he try to take that medicine. He doesn’t have any parents, just like a Ben and Lisa. But at least they have grandfather. That’s why he was jealous of him and doesn’t like Ben and Lisa. But he knows their grandfather was sick and he give special medicine to Ben, and Lisa. After that happen three of them go back to Ben and Lisa’s house and give medicine to Ben’s grandfather. It is really amazing because now his grandfather can walk himself and he is not sick anymore. After that happen Ben, Lisa, grandfather and Jack live very happily in village.